ghost heart.

July 24, 2010
By maryannmartinez SILVER, Anaheim, California
maryannmartinez SILVER, Anaheim, California
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Favorite Quote:
"dont be afraid to fail , be afraid not to try "


I had enough of this,
I'm tired of spending my nights crying
while you spend your nights lying,
Were you really too much to ask for?
I hate this feeling of how I draw myself to quotes and make myself believe I can ever actually have a chance with you,
but now it's clear like the bright blue sky, that your nothing but a piece of lie.
I still ask myself, Were you even worth my time?
But now I see the truth that you have made me live among my life,
Truth is your a dart to my heart,
No more crying,
No more hesitating,
No more staying up til' 11:11 pm
Who are you too tell me who I am?
But I guess it all comes for your ghost heart...



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on Aug. 18 2010 at 8:39 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

Oooooh, I like this one even more than your last one. Very, very, very, very nice. I really have no critique because it was perfect... EXCEPT the flow could have been a tad (but just a small tad) better. Good job.

 


on Aug. 15 2010 at 8:50 pm
maryannmartinez SILVER, Anaheim, California
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Favorite Quote:
"dont be afraid to fail , be afraid not to try "

thank you. i really appreciate it.

(:


on Aug. 13 2010 at 11:38 am
just-a-joy GOLD, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Eminem: Success is my only option, failure's not

i feel u just had a brake up and its hell

on Aug. 13 2010 at 9:23 am
jward24895 SILVER, Montour Falls, New York
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"I have noticed even people who claim everything is predestined, and that we can do nothing to change it, look before they cross the road.” -Stephen Hawking

I really like this. You have a nice writing style.


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