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ghost heart.

I had enough of this,
I'm tired of spending my nights crying
while you spend your nights lying,
Were you really too much to ask for?
I hate this feeling of how I draw myself to quotes and make myself believe I can ever actually have a chance with you,
but now it's clear like the bright blue sky, that your nothing but a piece of lie.
I still ask myself, Were you even worth my time?
But now I see the truth that you have made me live among my life,
Truth is your a dart to my heart,
No more crying,
No more hesitating,
No more staying up til' 11:11 pm
Who are you too tell me who I am?
But I guess it all comes for your ghost heart...



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sleeplessdreamer said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 8:39 pm

Oooooh, I like this one even more than your last one. Very, very, very, very nice. I really have no critique because it was perfect... EXCEPT the flow could have been a tad (but just a small tad) better. Good job.

 

 
just-a-joy said...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 11:38 am
i feel u just had a brake up and its hell
 
jward24895 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 13, 2010 at 9:23 am
I really like this. You have a nice writing style.
 
maryannm replied...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 8:50 pm

thank you. i really appreciate it.

(:

 
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