things i cannot explain

July 17, 2010
By babigerl1194 PLATINUM, Margaretville, New York
babigerl1194 PLATINUM, Margaretville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
wat doesnt kill you only makes you stronger


things I cannot explain -
Like the way I want you
when I don’t at all.
Like the things I do
when I’m not doing anything.
Like when im smiling
but crying hard.
&& When im quiet
but I have everything to say.



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on Aug. 12 2010 at 9:33 am
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

Nice irony and parallelism. It's great. I loved it. Very short and to the point but has a lot of honesty behind it. Nice job. 


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