Frosted Heartbreak(Triple Rictamerter)

July 17, 2010
By *Nik* GOLD, Kennesaw, Georgia
*Nik* GOLD, Kennesaw, Georgia
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Cold air
lingers with your
frail picture on the wall
your glow has faded and I see
the agony you kept inside your smile.
I never knew pain until you
vanished from the future
leaving behind
the past.

like layers
of aloneness drape me
when stuck inside a dry slumber.
You were the humidity of the night
now I must lay with brittle sheets
comfort gone along with the
essence in life--
my heart.

over like a
lake in a bad snowstorm.
How do I heat what has died?
Life needs warmth and you are so cold.
There is no way to cure this hurt
or fix this pain from my
lovely frosted

The author's comments:
Rictameter 2-4-6-8-10-8-6-4-2. One of my favorite forms to use

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