I Sun You

July 16, 2010
By Chloe Bell SILVER, Warren, Ohio
Chloe Bell SILVER, Warren, Ohio
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Red sun, falling over, falling in.
You are the color of love,
of blood, of wine, of pomegranate.
I taste you Sun,
dripping down my throat,
Warm, wet, sick sweet.
Setting before my eyes,
you leave me every night.
Faithless, forgotten night,
full of your memory,
void of crimson shine.
Sun, our hearts became intertwined.
Two suns, two souls
wrapped in a coat made of dirt, of trust, of wool, of forever.
I see you, I sun you, I heart you,
I love you,
Rise for me, red sun,
color my insides.


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on Aug. 11 2010 at 4:19 am
BellaEzrebetFang SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"I write as I breathe because if I didn't I would die."

This is a truly wonderful description of the sun. I absolutely love "I see you, I sun you, I heart you." I also absolutely love "Red sun, falling over, falling in." 

on Aug. 10 2010 at 3:20 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

This poem is one of my favorites of the ones I have read on this website so far. You have a magical sense of words. You described the sun beautifully, and I love the title.




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