Speechless

July 20, 2010
By silent_reader BRONZE, Columbia, Maryland
silent_reader BRONZE, Columbia, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"I cannot live without books." - Thomas Jefferson


I am speechless
I have no words
my mouth wont open
you left me speechless
you hurt me
you crushed me
I thought we were on the same team
But im wrong apparantly
So im speechless
with no words
I dont know if i'll be able to talk again
You're a trader
But you're not worth it
worth the trouble to open my mouth
So i'll stay quiet
and walk away
because....
thats what you did



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Lucy(: GOLD said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 9:16 pm
Lucy(: GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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i feel like you really laid out the words for us so much that we didn't have to think or put any puzzle together. it was like staring through clear glass

that can be very effective, a poem that makes sense and people can relate to. i love most poems where its hidden beneath, but this is a great poem for its simplicity and strength.

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mask456 GOLD said...
on Aug. 10 2010 at 5:41 pm
mask456 GOLD, Marietta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
There is no fire without smoke

I liked the meaing of the poem and keep writing its a wonderful way to let ur inself out i really liked it.

 

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on Aug. 10 2010 at 2:35 pm
Bella_142 BRONZE, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
"a father isn't suppose to beat his own flesh and blood."

wow that is just amazing, i could feel the emotion when i was reading it. good work.

Shahed GOLD said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 3:55 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

You know this relates to me some how, I love it, !! Great job :)

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on Aug. 9 2010 at 1:18 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

Very well written and a bit sad. Silence is much more complicated than is credited by those who speak.




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