Things I'll Never Tell You

July 13, 2010
By MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.


I'll probably never tell you
How you destroyed everything that I am
I won't tell you
How the cruel things you say hurt me
That they leave a scaring that will never go away
I'll never tell you
That I can't live without you
Because then when you give up on me
You'll believe I can't survive without you
My guess is, I'll never tell you
That you mean more to me than I mean to myself,
That I would give anything for you.
I would give the world for you.
There is no need for you to know
The things that haunt me from my past--
The things that still haunt me today.
I'll never tell you these things
Because I know you would never understand
I simply don't want your pity,
I don't want to expose those memories of my life
And I don't want you to know things
That I can't even understand myself.
I do not yet understand them,
And you never will.



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on Sep. 3 2010 at 2:39 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

thankss!! :)

on Sep. 1 2010 at 11:50 pm
mysterywriter11 GOLD, Dickson, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
Reach for the moon, even if you miss, you'll land among the stars. ♥ ♫♪♫♪♫♪
"believe in your dreams, no matter how small or big they are, you might just be surprised... "

"because when you give up on me you'll believe I can't survive without you" ♣♥♥

on Aug. 13 2010 at 12:01 am
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

thank you soo so much:) i really appriciate your honesty and nice comment:) and i know what you mean by "moving too it". i deff move to a lot of other peoples work. thanks again!

on Aug. 12 2010 at 9:47 am
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

Wow, this was fabulous. I loved it. I liked the steady, but not overdone, repetition of "I'll never tell you" lines. it really read well and i found myself moving to it... if that makes any sense. Good job. 




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