The Waters Edge

July 13, 2010
the warm summer air
seeping into my skin
the golden sand squeezing itself
between my toes
the noisiness and laughter,
ringing in my ears
so many things can be seen
on a beach
parents tanning
while their children rush
to create the biggest sandcastle,
teenagers listening to music
under the heat of the sun,
old couples walking along,
holding wrinkled hands
seagulls swooping down to eat
stray food
the tides are the greatest sight
so relentess
in, out
in, out
never tiring
always happy to please,
those who swim in the water
always laughing at teasing,
those at
the waters edge





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Emmaline said...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 8:44 am
This is really good, ur great at imagery...but for me it doesn't seem like a poem, more of a really really short story!
 
awriterslife replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 12:38 am
i definitely agree, sometimes i think too 'much' and it just turns out in to a story, ill work on that in the future! keep writing :)
 
Kingfan123 said...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 8:11 am
Great poem! You really had wonderful imagery! I could smell the beaching air as I was reading it! You're a great writer! Keep up the awesome work!
 
awriterslife replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 12:38 am
thank you so much! your feedback means alot to me. i really appreciate it. keep writing :)
 
Undefinable said...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 8:04 am
i love this poem!
 
awriterslife replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 12:39 am
thank you :) !!
 
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