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It is golden, to a perfected light brown
Elegantly contrasting your piercingly green eyes
Your cherry red lips
They are full and have a tasteful appearance
Your brows, gracefully arched over
Those long and thick black eye lashes
A perfectly sculpted nose
Evenly portioning out its surroundings
Those invisibly microscopic pores
Leave behind the clearest and cleanest soft skin
Leading to the deeply engraved scar
Stretching from your right brow,
Too those cherishable, kissable lips
A forever reminding memory
Of the greatest beauty about you,
You heart, mind and soul that remain determinedly beautiful from within.




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Lexie96 said...
Nov. 3, 2011 at 9:02 pm:

This is really good, and very well-written... it flows really nicely.

Do you think you could check out my poem Sowing Poppies sometime?

 
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ErisRoseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 10:01 am:
I loved this! it was amazing! comment on some of mine if you can:)
 
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MissFaber said...
Oct. 10, 2010 at 7:53 pm:

Oh. my goodness. Really, I don't know what it is, but something about this poem made the whole world stop moving for about two seconds after I was done.

That's a great achievement, you know. ;)

Comment on some of mine? thnx :)

 
MercedesXO replied...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 9:48 am :
omgosh really?? thank you sooo much:) and yeah ill comment on your work!
 
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sasssgirrrl22 said...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 3:35 pm:
Awww! so sweeeet. Imagery is undeniably superb. plzzzz keep writing!
 
MercedesXO replied...
Aug. 21, 2010 at 1:07 pm :
thanks soo muchh!! greatly appriciated
 
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Marlyre This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 5:55 pm:
your imagery is superb! read some of mine?
 
MercedesXO replied...
Aug. 21, 2010 at 1:07 pm :

thank youu:)

and most deff!!

 
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