This distance

July 12, 2010
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This distance
It stings like
Embedded thorns
That are bearable at first
But pain me more and more
Each new day
If I try to
pull them out
I will never stop bleeding
This distance
I try to find relief in
The words and truths
Of somebody else
But my thoughts wander
And I remember
This distance
You must know that
You are enough for me and
I was an incredible fool to
Ever loosen my grasp
On your wrists
To call you mine
I would die and think
Only of you for
Eternity
This distance.





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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 3:59 pm
This was a very powerful poem for me. It was written very well, and I love how you repeated the words. Well done.
 
poetress replied...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 3:24 pm
Wow, thank you so much! I've just started posting my writing and getting feedback like your's is amazing. Makes me feel like what I'm doing isn't such a waste of time. I really appreciate it.
 
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