Your tears

July 11, 2010
By Flora SILVER, Allen Park, Michigan
Flora SILVER, Allen Park, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Darkness does not always equate to evil, just as light does not always bring good.


The heartbreaking look on your face, the sadness that can't be ignored makes my eyes swell with tears. It makes me want to take all your pain and suffer away with any way there is. I wish I can make you forget it and put the smile that looks so gone from your face, that it won't be surfacing the top anytime soon. It crushes me to know that I can't do anything to redeem it. Droplets of tears that are begging to be erased but won't stop flowing. Those are the exact tears that describe to me the words you can't form


The author's comments:
I wrote this after i saw my aunt sitting sadly on the couch and i just started tearing up for her and thought i should try to take it out somewhere else.

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cookiegirl said...
on Sep. 21 2011 at 11:11 am
This is beautiful and emotional:) Nice job!

Flora SILVER said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 1:45 pm
Flora SILVER, Allen Park, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Darkness does not always equate to evil, just as light does not always bring good.

thank you very much

on Aug. 9 2010 at 9:46 am
Bnubbs PLATINUM, Goshen, Kentucky
21 articles 6 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let it be! All you need is love!

I really like this poem!! it's really good and i can relate to how you feel. keep writing!!!

Flora SILVER said...
on Aug. 7 2010 at 10:02 pm
Flora SILVER, Allen Park, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Darkness does not always equate to evil, just as light does not always bring good.

Thanks, and I LOVE my aunt so much, Thanks again. =)

Flora SILVER said...
on Aug. 7 2010 at 10:01 pm
Flora SILVER, Allen Park, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Darkness does not always equate to evil, just as light does not always bring good.

Thank you very Much. This means a lot to me.

vamp1 said...
on Aug. 7 2010 at 2:14 am
vamp1, Lakeland, Tennessee
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AWW SWEET!!!!!!!

on Aug. 6 2010 at 7:57 pm
*~Lynx~* SILVER, Cathedral City, California
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Favorite Quote:
If you love someone, let them go. If they come back to you it was meant to be.......

Beautiful. Very touching. Very simple, but extraordinary. 

on Aug. 6 2010 at 9:44 am
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1634 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

This was wonderfully written. Although it was sad, I found it very touching that you care about your aunt this much. The compassion you feel when you look on at another's sadness is almost indescribable, but you put it into words well.

Shweta SILVER said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 5:52 am
Shweta SILVER, Saharsa, Other
5 articles 0 photos 40 comments
wow...I just love it.Looks like you love your aunt very much and your words make people realize it.Very nice.Can you please check out my work..Got only one right now,others are pending approval.


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