The heartbreaking look on your face, the sadness that can't be ignored makes my eyes swell with tears. It makes me want to take all your pain and suffer away with any way there is. I wish I can make you forget it and put the smile that looks so gone from your face, that it won't be surfacing the top anytime soon. It crushes me to know that I can't do anything to redeem it. Droplets of tears that are begging to be erased but won't stop flowing. Those are the exact tears that describe to me the words you can't form
cookiegirl said...
Sept. 21, 2011 at 11:11 am:
Sept. 21, 2011 at 11:11 am:
This is beautiful and emotional:) Nice job!
Breanna N. 
I really like this poem!! it's really good and i can relate to how you feel. keep writing!!!
vamp1
*~Lynx~*Beautiful. Very touching. Very simple, but extraordinary.
Thesilentraven
This was wonderfully written. Although it was sad, I found it very touching that you care about your aunt this much. The compassion you feel when you look on at another's sadness is almost indescribable, but you put it into words well.
nightinglewow...I just love it.Looks like you love your aunt very much and your words make people realize it.Very nice.Can you please check out my work..Got only one right now,others are pending approval.
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