Nothing to Lose

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I just wanna
put my all in you
commit my very being
to doing all you want me to

with you
there is nothing to mislay
no mishaps
and no mistakes
everything to gain
lifetimes of pleasure
lifetimes of pain

though it seems
like you may be so far away
i can feel
your presence

there's not a day
where your essense
doesn't shine upon me
like the very sun
that refreshes my inner being

if i had to pick
between you
and the tangiblity
of worldly things
you'd be so easy to choose
because with you
i never lose.





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Breanna N. said...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 9:49 am
omg!!! i love this poem sooooo much!!!! keep writing more like this please!!!! it's really good and i can so relate to it :)
 
imabeme727 replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 12:21 pm
Thanks so much for the positive feedback, Breanna.  I'm actually thinking of publishing a book of my own poetry; it's people like you who solidify the notion that it could actually have some meaning to teens everywhere.
 
Breanna N. replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 12:33 pm
your welcome! and you should get a book published!! teens DO relate alot to poetry and it helps some get through tough times. and if you do get the book published let me know!!!
 
imabeme727 replied...
Aug. 9, 2010 at 12:47 pm
Sure thing!  Again, thanks for the positive reinforcement. :)
 
forevercece said...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 3:25 pm

Wow, this is amazing.  I would love to read more of your work.

You live in Easton?!  I have this friend who is trying to publish a poetry book and lives in Easton. You two should meet.

 
imabeme247 replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 4:46 pm
Lmao!  Haha, we definitely have to make some arrangements.
 
Francesca said...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 2:53 pm
This is very good.
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 9:58 am
Wonderfully put and very true.
 
imabeme247 replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 10:38 am
Thank you so much.  I totally appreciate the kind words.
 
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