Fake Sky.

July 9, 2010
By , Battle Ground, WA
The sun is shinning brightly
As I'm walking down the blue ocean.
The wind is blowing lightly
Messing up my long hair with its slow motion.

As I look up at the deep blue sky
With each second my heart beats faster.
Do you think that I can fly?
Theres a cliff ..Should I give it a try?

I'm walking towards it,
I'm scared i will admit.
But I'm walking towards it.
I know I want to quit.

I turn around. Look around.
I hear some sound. Someone's voice.
Don't go. Don't Do it. Its a mistake.
You'll kill yourself. The sky is fake.

I hear the voice but see no body.

I open my eyes
I'm wet with sweat.
This is the dream
I won't forget.

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Jenny Millie said...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 1:36 pm
WOW! so strong! i love it!
jassmine said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 3:06 pm
great job! i could even picture this in my mind(: keep writing! and can u rate my work?
alenkaaa replied...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 3:23 pm
thank you! and yes i will:) i always return favors!:)
Kelly C. said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 2:25 pm
wow! this poem is strong! i could feel the tension while reading it!!! Great job!! keep writing!!!!!
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