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I Was There

The children crying, the old whinning, and the hurt shouting
I have seen it all
Boom!Boom!Boom!
Pow!Pow!Pow!
I was there

There were bleeding drops of red everywhere
I saw my soldier with bruises and cuts
I was there

I ran to save the little girl
I ran to take her away from the burning house
I ran and saw that she was there holding my hand
I ran and knew that I saved her
I was there

I had already had broken bones,
But now that I have saved that girl
I now no more have a broken heart
I'm a hero
I was there



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crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 9:12 pm
This is great!! i lvoe how u put yourself in a different persons perspective so refreshing!! If you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!! thanks and ur sooo good!!!
 
Uniqueada replied...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 12:06 pm
Thanks, i'll try to remeber to look at ur work :)
 
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