I Was There

July 9, 2010
By Uniqueada PLATINUM, Durham, North Carolina
Uniqueada PLATINUM, Durham, North Carolina
25 articles 48 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Yes we can"- President Obama


The children crying, the old whinning, and the hurt shouting
I have seen it all
Boom!Boom!Boom!
Pow!Pow!Pow!
I was there

There were bleeding drops of red everywhere
I saw my soldier with bruises and cuts
I was there

I ran to save the little girl
I ran to take her away from the burning house
I ran and saw that she was there holding my hand
I ran and knew that I saved her
I was there

I had already had broken bones,
But now that I have saved that girl
I now no more have a broken heart
I'm a hero
I was there


The author's comments:
This was homework. It connected with war

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on Aug. 5 2010 at 12:06 pm
Uniqueada PLATINUM, Durham, North Carolina
25 articles 48 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Yes we can"- President Obama

Thanks, i'll try to remeber to look at ur work :)

on Aug. 4 2010 at 9:12 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is great!! i lvoe how u put yourself in a different persons perspective so refreshing!! If you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!! thanks and ur sooo good!!!


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