My Battered Soul

July 12, 2010
By TerraTAZz GOLD, Sapulpa, Oklahoma
TerraTAZz GOLD, Sapulpa, Oklahoma
18 articles 3 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody goes through life without a scar.







-carol burnett


Lord Fix my broken heart and,
mend my battered Soul,
Lord shield me form the things I have been told.

Unfaithful is to humans,
as numbers are to Math,
but lord at times it's so hard to follow your Path.

Help me make the right decisions Lord, in a way only you could in vision.

I ask my lord for your forgiveness in everything i do, because in everything i do, in the end, it will all lead me back to you.


The author's comments:
I had a dream one night that i was sitting at an old oak desk, one i do not own, and i was writing this poem. So i woke up, and wrote it down. I am not sure why i dreampt of this, but i like it. i hope you do too.

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TerraTAZz GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 4:52 am
TerraTAZz GOLD, Sapulpa, Oklahoma
18 articles 3 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody goes through life without a scar.







-carol burnett

Thankss bunches for commenting on my work:)

TerraTAZz GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 4:51 am
TerraTAZz GOLD, Sapulpa, Oklahoma
18 articles 3 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody goes through life without a scar.







-carol burnett

Thanks for reading it and commenting:)

TerraTAZz GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 4:51 am
TerraTAZz GOLD, Sapulpa, Oklahoma
18 articles 3 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody goes through life without a scar.







-carol burnett

Thanks for reading and commenting it:)

TerraTAZz GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2010 at 4:50 am
TerraTAZz GOLD, Sapulpa, Oklahoma
18 articles 3 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nobody goes through life without a scar.







-carol burnett

Thannkk you for your comment i Really really appreciate it!!! :)

Chloe_ BRONZE said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 10:49 pm
Chloe_ BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never underestimate the power of doing the ordinary in quite extraordinary ways.

Wow thats really cool how you wrote it and got the idea i guess is the word! great job!

 


on Aug. 4 2010 at 8:44 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Wow thats so cool how u wrote the poem!! its just so unique and motivaitonal!! If you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!! thanks and ur sooo good!!!

on Aug. 4 2010 at 12:33 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1634 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

This is a heartfelt and meaningful prayer that was full of truth. Thanks for writing it!

on Aug. 4 2010 at 8:02 am
Rulesofmyown GOLD, Saida, Other
11 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow

like like like!! great one...check out some of my work please:)




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