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My Battered Soul

Lord Fix my broken heart and,
mend my battered Soul,
Lord shield me form the things I have been told.

Unfaithful is to humans,
as numbers are to Math,
but lord at times it's so hard to follow your Path.

Help me make the right decisions Lord, in a way only you could in vision.

I ask my lord for your forgiveness in everything i do, because in everything i do, in the end, it will all lead me back to you.





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V-ballChick said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 10:49 pm

Wow thats really cool how you wrote it and got the idea i guess is the word! great job!

 

 
TerraTAZz replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 4:52 am
Thankss bunches for commenting on my work:)
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 8:44 pm
Wow thats so cool how u wrote the poem!! its just so unique and motivaitonal!! If you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!! thanks and ur sooo good!!!
 
TerraTAZz replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 4:50 am
Thannkk you for your comment i Really really appreciate it!!! :)
 
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 12:33 pm
This is a heartfelt and meaningful prayer that was full of truth. Thanks for writing it!
 
TerraTAZz replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 4:51 am
Thanks for reading and commenting it:)
 
Rulesofmyown said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 8:02 am
like like like!! great one...check out some of my work please:)
 
TerraTAZz replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 4:51 am
Thanks for reading it and commenting:)
 
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