Kissing Little Flowers

August 1, 2010
By Chrome_Clouds SILVER, Winterport, Maine
Chrome_Clouds SILVER, Winterport, Maine
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As you lied there in the field,
kissing little flowers,
the ocean wind stopped by
and unwound the loose braids
you had tied in your hair.
The sun darkened your skin
but you didn’t care as you lied there,
kissing little flowers.
The grass made a mold around you body
and the ocean wind caressed your skirt
and unwound the braids in your hair
but you didn’t care.
The clouds drifted over your body
and made patterns on your eyes
as you watched the blue of the sky fade
into the pale purple of the summer
as you lied there, kissing little flowers.
And the ocean wind brushed past the lavender
to match the sky and to take your mind away to
where you made patterns on the clouds.



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on Aug. 6 2010 at 3:09 pm
Chrome_Clouds SILVER, Winterport, Maine
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Teehehe, thankyou :]

on Aug. 6 2010 at 3:08 pm
Chrome_Clouds SILVER, Winterport, Maine
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Thanks and no problem

on Aug. 6 2010 at 3:08 pm
Chrome_Clouds SILVER, Winterport, Maine
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Thaaaankkksss :}

on Aug. 6 2010 at 3:07 pm
Chrome_Clouds SILVER, Winterport, Maine
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Why thank you

on Aug. 6 2010 at 3:07 pm
Chrome_Clouds SILVER, Winterport, Maine
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Thanks very much :]

on Aug. 5 2010 at 11:44 am
Daydreamer14 PLATINUM, Norman, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Reality leaves a lot to the imagination." - John Lennon

I love this poem! It flows really well and is simply beautiful. Great job!:)

on Aug. 4 2010 at 8:40 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

OMG this is amazing!! the word choice is beautiful and so whimsical!!! If you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!! thanks and ur sooo good!!!

on Aug. 4 2010 at 12:30 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

This is beautifully written. The words created an extraordinary scene in my mind.

on Aug. 4 2010 at 2:55 am
teenbookworm14 PLATINUM, Plainfield, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Nothing gold can stay" -Robert Frost

all i can say is that this is amazing! keep writing

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on Aug. 4 2010 at 12:35 am
Trebled SILVER, Gladstone, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you imagine is real." - Pablo Picasso

Wow. This is really beautiful. You have great imagery abilities.


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