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Kissing Little Flowers

As you lied there in the field,
kissing little flowers,
the ocean wind stopped by
and unwound the loose braids
you had tied in your hair.
The sun darkened your skin
but you didn’t care as you lied there,
kissing little flowers.
The grass made a mold around you body
and the ocean wind caressed your skirt
and unwound the braids in your hair
but you didn’t care.
The clouds drifted over your body
and made patterns on your eyes
as you watched the blue of the sky fade
into the pale purple of the summer
as you lied there, kissing little flowers.
And the ocean wind brushed past the lavender
to match the sky and to take your mind away to
where you made patterns on the clouds.



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Daydreamer14 said...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 11:44 am:
I love this poem! It flows really well and is simply beautiful. Great job!:)
 
Jordano_C This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 3:09 pm :
Teehehe, thankyou :]
 
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crubs3This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 8:40 pm:
OMG this is amazing!! the word choice is beautiful and so whimsical!!! If you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!! thanks and ur sooo good!!!
 
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Aug. 6, 2010 at 3:08 pm :
Thanks and no problem
 
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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 12:30 pm:
This is beautifully written. The words created an extraordinary scene in my mind.
 
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Aug. 6, 2010 at 3:08 pm :
Thaaaankkksss :}
 
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writerx14 said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 2:55 am:
all i can say is that this is amazing! keep writing
 
Jordano_C This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 3:07 pm :
Why thank you
 
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Trebled said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 12:35 am:
Wow. This is really beautiful. You have great imagery abilities.
 
Jordano_C This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 3:07 pm :
Thanks very much :]
 
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