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Bitterly Torn
July 31, 2010
I loved you and lied
Which has torn my insides
My heart thumped when we talked
But now it’s trapped shut with locks
I’ll live so be happy for me and you
Since we just threw out what was true
The tears that ran down my cheeks
Don’t worry, it was just a leak
I know my bitter sarcasm won’t do much
But it makes up for love and as such
Good bye my once faithful love
Now you don’t have to deal with my ‘stuff’
© Anonymous
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Jaredwritescoolstuff BRONZE said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 3:49 pm
I definitly think some of the best poems come out of this simplicity, I really liked the emotion you got across, if you are thinking about revising, maybe a little more concrete images would be effective, maybe to describe who the speaker is talking to/about. Great poem!
MercedesXO DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 5:33 pm
this is great!! i love the ending and how you tie it all in. the somplicity and the truth behind it is awesome. great work:)
i'd love it if you (or anyone else reading this) could check out some of my work. especially my poem 'Tortuer of a King' appriciated:)
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