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I’m here thinking
I’m here pondering
You have got me twisted
I try to shield this away
My thoughts of missing you
My voice in my head
Pounding through the walls of my mind
For some odd reason
I can’t bear to break another heart
Of another fool
I have done many ungrateful things
Hurting guys
Left them to cry alone
Always been faithful to all
But always leaving them behind
With all the lost tracks of my steps
You keep on investigating
To know where I’m going
But you always get so lost in my life
I would kiss you through the phone
Lead you on
Like how I will be feeling
For you
I’m in love with you
With many different reasons why
I do
The way you comfort me
The way you’ll never leave me
Sitting alone with tears to fall
I never had tears to fall
Like I did to every heart
I broke and crushed
Burned into ashes
Smelling the salt from all the tears
That was once dropped from them
But you are different
I don’t want to cry for you
I want to comfort you
I want to please you
I want you to be happy
I want you realize you are nothing
Compare to a Edward Cullens
Because you are greater
You are the one and only Joe
I love from California





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chastity said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 11:06 pm
this is amazing work check some of mine out
 
asiangurl replied...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 7:07 am
k...i  will.thank you very much
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 8:48 pm
This is so amazing!!! love it!! If you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!! thanks and ur sooo good!!!
 
asiangurl replied...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 7:07 am
thank you vvery much n will read youor writings. n i dearly appriciate the comment. it means a lot
 
monnie said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 7:23 pm
its absolutley amazing i love every bit of it
 
asiangurl replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 11:21 pm
aww thank you very much...i luv ur comment.lol but i deeply appricate it chica. oh yeahhh i can't spell
 
moonpetal said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 5:58 pm
That was really good! Wow! Hah loved the edward cullen thing you put lol! That was really good I relate in some many ways. Thanks for writing it good jod!
 
asiangurl replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 6:20 pm
awww thank you....he's nuthin but better than edward cullen, u know alot of gurls be crushin on him dats why i add it. a lil flavor..hahhah lol but thank you greatly to give me sum feedback<3
 
moonpetal replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 6:44 pm
LOL XD Ah well nice for you to think of the readers XD Your welcome.Love how you wrote that XD sum LOL, nice.
 
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 2:34 pm
I love this!! (Especially the first 15 lines or so :) Really great - sweet and honest and relatable.  Could you check out my poem "Your Name & My Heart"? I'd really appreciate some feedback..Thanks so much and please keep writing!
 
asiangurl replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 5:42 pm
AWW thank you,it means alot seriously but yes ill read dat poem n ill give u sum ffeedback. thank u very much
 
StarStrukk said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 2:13 pm

This is really good I have to say, and in the beginning, you actually reminded me a little bit of myself. Two thumbs up :)

 

 

 
asiangurl replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 2:17 pm
awww thank you...it means alot for ur comment n ur thumbs up:) i greatly do appricate it<3 im glad when people be tellin me that they could relate to it cuz theres always sum1 who could relate to sum1 in the world
 
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