July 8, 2010
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I feel suffocated there are so many people around me,
Yet I am all alone here.
And although there are many fish in the sea,
There are none that will ever draw near
To me.
I am different, but it seems
That that is not all,
Unimaigably knowing
And so they try to fix me
But I scream for them to stop trying to fix
What is not broken.

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Otto. said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 3:37 pm
Wow, thanks guys... that really lights up mah day. :)
erikae said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 1:57 pm
This is sad, but beautiful. I can relate. Great job :)
cameronjay said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 12:31 am
i love this. my favorite lines are "But I scream for them to stop trying to fix
What is not broken." (: p.s. can u rate or comment my poem?
Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 4:01 pm
Heartbreaking... I know the feeling, except maybe for the 'sadistic' part.
Otto. replied...
Dec. 28, 2010 at 12:42 pm
Haha, thanx you guys. :D.
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