Alone

July 8, 2010
By Otto. PLATINUM, Pueblo, Colorado
Otto. PLATINUM, Pueblo, Colorado
20 articles 5 photos 13 comments

Alone
I feel suffocated there are so many people around me,
Yet I am all alone here.
And although there are many fish in the sea,
There are none that will ever draw near
To me.
I am different, but it seems
That that is not all,
Sadistic
Twisted
Unimaigably knowing
And so they try to fix me
But I scream for them to stop trying to fix
What is not broken.


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Otto. PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 28 2010 at 12:42 pm
Otto. PLATINUM, Pueblo, Colorado
20 articles 5 photos 13 comments
Haha, thanx you guys. :D.

Otto. PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 3:37 pm
Otto. PLATINUM, Pueblo, Colorado
20 articles 5 photos 13 comments
Wow, thanks guys... that really lights up mah day. :)

erikae GOLD said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 1:57 pm
erikae GOLD, Brookfield, Wisconsin
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This is sad, but beautiful. I can relate. Great job :)

on Aug. 3 2010 at 12:31 am
jassmine BRONZE, Fort Worth, Texas
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i love this. my favorite lines are "But I scream for them to stop trying to fix
What is not broken." (: p.s. can u rate or comment my poem?

on Aug. 2 2010 at 4:01 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

Heartbreaking... I know the feeling, except maybe for the 'sadistic' part.


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