July 8, 2010
Words cant explain how I felt
When you broke it.
Left it shattered
So I clean it up,
Put it back together
Then when you ask if
we can be friends,
It falls again.
How would you do that?
Break my heart then break it again?
as i begin to put it back together you ask if I want to be with you again.
I guess until the next guy,
Some pieces of my heart
will just stay

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olican16 said...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 4:51 pm
thanks so much!!
givemetherapy said...
Aug. 10, 2010 at 11:25 pm
this is really great! i love your writing style and the way you use a new line each time
olican16 replied...
Sept. 30, 2010 at 7:22 pm
thanks!!! i love this poem its one of my favs ive written!! thanks so much!
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 9:50 am
Wow Liv! This is really well-written and relatable. Great job, keep writing!
olican16 replied...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 4:48 pm
thanks al that means alot comin from a great reader like you!!!!
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