Shattered

July 8, 2010
By poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
23 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11


Words cant explain how I felt
When you broke it.
Left it shattered
So I clean it up,
Put it back together
Then when you ask if
we can be friends,
It falls again.
How would you do that?
Break my heart then break it again?
as i begin to put it back together you ask if I want to be with you again.
I guess until the next guy,
Some pieces of my heart
will just stay
SHATTERED.



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on Sep. 30 2010 at 7:22 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

thanks!!! i love this poem its one of my favs ive written!! thanks so much!

on Aug. 11 2010 at 4:51 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
23 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

thanks so much!!

on Aug. 10 2010 at 11:25 pm
givemetherapy SILVER, Mount Vernon, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Hope is what you cling to when reality has left you with nothing else."

this is really great! i love your writing style and the way you use a new line each time

on Aug. 4 2010 at 4:48 pm
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM, Groesbeck, Texas
23 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , "For I know the plans I have for you," declares the Lord "They are plans to give you a hope and a future.'' Jeremiah 29:11

thanks al that means alot comin from a great reader like you!!!!

on Aug. 4 2010 at 9:50 am
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

Wow Liv! This is really well-written and relatable. Great job, keep writing!


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