Mirror, Mirror

July 7, 2010
By MelanieLouise PLATINUM, Plymouth, Minnesota
MelanieLouise PLATINUM, Plymouth, Minnesota
37 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
to live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong


mirror, mirror
on the wall
why do you show a lie?

i look so fake, emotionless
living in the shadow of
who i am supposed to be

my smile is so forced, broken
my eyes are and abyss of guilt
my skin is pale and cold
my arm are puckered with sadness

mirror, mirror
oh broken mirror
i smashed you in
for showing a lie.


The author's comments:
this is about how the outside is most definitely not what is on the inside.

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on Aug. 4 2010 at 11:33 am
thezebrasgray PLATINUM, Taylorsville, Utah
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i love this! it's awesome!

on Aug. 3 2010 at 2:46 pm
MelanieLouise PLATINUM, Plymouth, Minnesota
37 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
to live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong

oh gosh thank you :)

on Aug. 3 2010 at 2:25 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

As I'm reading your work, I love each one of your pieces more than the last!! I can't believe this one has no comments! Absolutely amazing! 


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