July 6, 2010
By JustBreathe BRONZE, Peachland, Other
JustBreathe BRONZE, Peachland, Other
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I finally came back,
Fear clawing at my stomach.
Trying to be relaxed.
Every joint,
As tense as possible.
Trembling aspen.
You b****ed me out,
But in a
Sort of civil way.
I was okay.
Then you started
Talking behind my back,
Whispered insults,
And I couldn’t breathe,
And I wanted to punch you
In the face.
Like, legit,
As you would say.

The author's comments:
One of the people that I THOUGHT was my friend got mad at me for NO REASON whatsoever. Sooo, i kinda skipped school for, like, a week... But when I came back, THAT'S what happened. B****...

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on Aug. 10 2010 at 3:28 pm
foreveroctober GOLD, Pompton Plains, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Life, he realized, was much like a song. In the beginning there is mystery, in the end there is confirmation, but it's the middle where all the emotion resides to make the whole thing worthwhile." - The Last Song, Nicholas Sparks

Wow i really like this poem. i had a similar situation once where i found out my BEST friend wasn't even a friend at all- she dropped me for another friend. Good job. keep writing.


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