Loving Your Smile

July 3, 2010
By punkr0cker365 ELITE, Bedford, New York
punkr0cker365 ELITE, Bedford, New York
100 articles 2 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not."
Kurt Cobain

I love the way you smile, been
thinking about this for awhile.

I can't get you out of my mind, you're really kind.

When I see you around, sometimes it feels like I've drowned.

It's telling me to stand my ground, but I just can't when you're around.

I want to hold you in my arms, away from worlds harm.

I want to kiss you like there's no tomorrow, just take me away from all this sorrow.

Even though we don't talk, all we need is to take a walk.

I'll show you everything about me, just hoping you will see, this is all we can be, if there was a you and me.

If the world would leave me alone, I will enter you into my zone.

Into my zone you will go, I will follow you in with the flow.

Don't ever need anyone other.

I will give you my love, fly away like a dove.

All I can say, is I love your smile

The author's comments:
I've been writing to this guy I really like anonymously on this website formspring. I decided to show my emotions for him through poetry. So that's how this poem blossomed and grew. For anyone who will read this, I know most of you can relate to this feeling, this emotion. I hope you enjoy it!

Similar Articles


This article has 1 comment.

on Aug. 10 2010 at 7:44 am
JakeShaw PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
23 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
When you're in a night that seems almost devoid of stars and you look but can't find someone to help you see. Look for that lonely star and let it guide you until you find the light. (anonymous)

You pour feeling into this piece and you can really feel that its personal! Amazing work!


MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!