Human fate.

July 2, 2010
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Weak at heart.
Fragile minds.
So easily we break.
Our emotions control most of what we do.
Making it harder to get through.
A fate, in which there is no escape.
So this as humans, as man-kind; is our fate.

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sleeplessdreamer said...
Aug. 14, 2010 at 7:08 pm

This is very good. I don't think that there is anything spectacular about your rhythm and flow, but the message and words you are getting across come to center focus because of that.  I liked the way you described us. It was very well written, though. Nicely done. I enjoyed this. 


beautiful_but_torn replied...
Feb. 9, 2012 at 7:51 pm
thanks very much.:D
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