Missing You, Can't Lie

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The many feelings inside of me
Kept repeating the same routine as before
Questioning if I should tell you
Honestly
The times you walk in at McDonalds
When you work 4 to close
And I work 1 to 7pm
Crushing down to keep a straight face
Pretend I’m better without him
In times, I doubt and I don’t
Words can’t replace the feelings inside of me
Wants to explode for two years
Missing you how you crank your music out loud
In the middle of the night
Cruising along the street lights
When I was your girl
Missing you
Every now and than
Walking away from the one
Who captured my heart
But yet blew it away like the ashes
Of each burn you gave me





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silent_reader said...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 1:57 pm
i really liked it
 
asiangurl replied...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 9:22 pm

thanks

 

 
LuvKirstyn14 said...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 12:44 pm
very nice poem. Keep it up! plz check out my writings, it would be highly appreciated :)
 
asiangurl replied...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 9:23 pm
i will n thank you, i dearly wan tu know,it means alot to me
 
MelanieLouise This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 10:03 am
love it. especially the ending :) keep writing, Mel. if you get a chance check out some of my work, please :) you're a great writer
 
asiangurl replied...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 9:22 pm
awwwww thank you....it means alot n i will check out ur writings<3
 
KoreyCooper10001 said...
Jul. 31, 2010 at 6:20 pm
this is really good. (: keep writing! i loved it.
 
asiangurl replied...
Jul. 31, 2010 at 9:00 pm
thank you...it means alot:) and dont u worry i will continue writing...lol hope u continue reading my writings
 
WriterGirl33 said...
Jul. 29, 2010 at 10:21 pm
his is great and I totally understand how you feel, I have the same problem sometimes
 
WriterGirl33 replied...
Jul. 29, 2010 at 10:22 pm
sorry i meant this
 
asiangurl replied...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 5:29 am
its k...but thank you for reading this:)
 
justwannabeme said...
Jul. 29, 2010 at 9:06 pm
I coMpletly agree with you. And iI kNow yoUR sITUATtion. AND IM SORRY I KEEP WRITING IN CAPS. (IPODS MESSED UP) PLZ KEEP WRITING. :)
 
asiangurl replied...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 5:28 am
nahh its k, to write in caps,idc honestly but thank you for reading:) n dont u worry i will write more
 
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