Thank You

June 14, 2010
By Aloravana PLATINUM, Wakonda, South Dakota
Aloravana PLATINUM, Wakonda, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
I don't care about what people say I don't have time to waste to try to please them.

I shake trembling under the fear
that I'll never escape but only tear
you look at me with large brown eyes
the look telling me that you know I am alright
I didn't think that I would remember you first
I never knew how much you could take away the hurt
Finally I stop and I blink back my memories
with you as guideline in front of me
I look around and all i see is unfamiliar faces
then I look at you and I remember all the places
people ask me if I'm okay but the truth is all I want to say
I didn't know I lost half of me
but you brought it all back to me
the memories flood and I start to cry
I wish I could thank you for bringing me back to life
but no words will describe what had happened that night
but I can only hope that this will do “Braxton Thank You”

The author's comments:
I wrote this because I had an incident that made me forget my past and this guy named Braxton talked to me and helped my remember most of my memories, and now they are all back. I really owe him a large Mountain Dew.

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