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Hello, Love

June 26, 2010
By lovelytee BRONZE, Lutz, Florida
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Hi, Love
Is it sad that I still love you?
Don’t say yes
The answer’s yes

Hey Love
Why do you always appear in my dreams?
Don’t say you don’t know
Neither of us know

Hello, Love
Did you know that I miss you?
Don’t look confused.
I do.
I do.

© Tiffany A., Southaven, MS

The author's comments:
This isn't a very "deep" poem, but it's something that I wrote on a whim after seeing my first love and having a short converstaion with him after being broken up for quite awhile. I changed his name to Love, to make it more relatable. I hope it gets the point across that love goes both ways, though without proper communication, it goes nowhere.
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PrincessLena ELITE said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 12:18 pm
PrincessLena ELITE, Orlando, Florida
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"We are what we pretend to be, so we must be careful what we pretend to be" - Kurt Vonnegut

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You tend to write a bunch of poems about the same thing; so do I. Just because it isn't deep doesn't mean it isn't real. It's an honest interpretation of what a lot of people go through.