Shattered

June 25, 2010
By softballbabe2014 SILVER, Wimberley, Texas
softballbabe2014 SILVER, Wimberley, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Smile now, Cry later." "everything happens for a reason"


The tears keep falling
along with her life.

what's held in her future will not be known.
Until she finds her way back home

So much pain is built up inside
She feels she's losing her mind

She feels her life is coming to an end.
Because she doesn't know how to mend.

She tells herself things will get better.
But what does that matter?

when her heart is shattered.



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on Jan. 11 2013 at 1:43 pm
NaomiPikalek GOLD, Millwaukee, Wisconsin
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i understand the pain in your words, and it puts that same hurt in my heart as im reading it. you pain pictures and emotions with your words that not many people could do !

Inksy SILVER said...
on Apr. 10 2012 at 11:52 pm
Inksy SILVER, NSL, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Three can keep a secret if two of them are dead"
~Benjamin Frankiln
"Love? Above all things I believe in love. Love is like oxygen. Love is a many splendored thing. Love lifts us up where we belong. All you need is love."
~Moulin Rouge

I like this a lot! It's beautifully simple and honest. Also, it's easy to relate to for me and a lot of us, I'm sure. 5/5 (:

on Feb. 27 2012 at 10:06 am
softballbabe2014 SILVER, Wimberley, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Smile now, Cry later." "everything happens for a reason"

Thank you(: and yes, this is based on a personal expierience...

on Feb. 27 2012 at 10:06 am
softballbabe2014 SILVER, Wimberley, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Smile now, Cry later." "everything happens for a reason"

Thank you so much!!!!((:

on Feb. 16 2012 at 10:30 pm
Zoe-22-Turner DIAMOND, Beverly, Massachusetts
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o my god the lost three lines just tore my heart out! absolutly gorgeous. those last 3 were abso-freaking-lutely B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L!!!!!!!

on Feb. 15 2012 at 11:24 pm
Kiki_McGee GOLD, Woodstock, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Hope is the thing with feathers that perches in the soul - and sings the tunes without the words - and never stops at all." - Emily Dickinson

Beautiful. The last lines really left an impact on me. Is this based on a personal experience?




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