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Endless Summer or Cheesy Poem #1

I was laying in bed alone
A thought came upon my head
It said,
“ Why did god made us?”
I was left to ponder that question
And at the same time a feeling of intense love and wanting came into my soul
I was missing something
A void was in my heart
I toss and turn remembering the moments
My heart and soul were confused
Did not understand why I was feeling like this
“ My son do you want to know why I created you?”
A voice from the sky ask me
Still I was tossing in the bed
Yet the voice kept asking the same question
The organ in my head put a memory
It was a precious memory
I was holding someone
Someone who my heart yearned for
She had long silky brown hair
And big brown eyes that showed her beautiful soul
Tears of sadness and joy rolled down our cheeks
Then the memory faded
My heart broke
So I got on my knees to see if God answered my question
No response
The organ in my head told me,
“ O, lonely soul do not cry or mope in despair
Remember the good times
Move on and
Be patience and love will be restored to the shattered soul”
Then a voice from the sky ask me,
“My son do you want to know why I created you?”
I nodded head up and down
He said,
“ To..
Tears fell from my face and a smile came upon me
I knew why I was here
To find her
The one who will
The one that makes me happy
And always helps me in those rough days
The one I love…



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crubs3This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 2:18 pm:
This is so creative!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
 
joele replied...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 1:15 pm :

its awesom

somtimes i ask myself da same question you hav inspiration

 
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