July 6, 2010
By ForeverFaith PLATINUM, Dansville, New York
ForeverFaith PLATINUM, Dansville, New York
20 articles 6 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"so this is how liberty dies, with a thunderous applause" -unknown

you sit there on your throne of clouds looking down on me, smiling.
i feel your presence with everything i do, every breath i take
i know im never alone.
you were taken from me at such a raw young age.
hopefully i will get to see your amazing face again, hear your laugh and look into your eyes.
until we meet again i will leave you with this; i love you

The author's comments:
this peice is about my friend who died in a car crash a few months ago, about how much i miss her, but also the hope that i will see her again on the other side

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on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:13 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is so descriptive!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!

trblue GOLD said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 8:44 am
trblue GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
14 articles 7 photos 141 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you, it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown. It only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and slap that mother@#?!&* upside the head. "

i wish i could hear u tell your poem

that sound so much better coming

the writer. you have and give so

much love to this one person, that i

want more from you. it was so

short compaire to a lifetime of

 friendship. u know


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