July 6, 2010
you sit there on your throne of clouds looking down on me, smiling.
i feel your presence with everything i do, every breath i take
i know im never alone.
you were taken from me at such a raw young age.
hopefully i will get to see your amazing face again, hear your laugh and look into your eyes.
until we meet again i will leave you with this; i love you

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trblue said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 8:44 am

i wish i could hear u tell your poem

that sound so much better coming

the writer. you have and give so

much love to this one person, that i

want more from you. it was so

short compaire to a lifetime of

 friendship. u know

crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 2:13 pm
This is so descriptive!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
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