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Her mountains will argue
Her volcanoes erupt
The tides that once soothed
Will explode with a rush

His creation will shake with fury
Adapting to what we already knew
His children will run and scurry
Recreating the ending of World War Two





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gymbabe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 8:02 pm
Wow....I agree this was very powerful, and very  well-written.  Amazing.
 
MercedesXO replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 8:23 pm
thank you!! :)
 
Miseltoe said...
Jul. 31, 2010 at 6:08 pm
wow short to the point and powerful. its beautiful
 
MercedesXO replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 11:16 am
thank you so much:)
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 2:09 pm
Wow this is really good!!  i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
 
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