Mr. Rightfornow

July 6, 2010
By MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.


You are my Mr. Rightfornow
Temporarily satisfying all my needs
Completing my thoughts of longing
But only at a mild said please
Mr. Rightfornow, you're an alright guy
Giving me a taste test of the later
Confiscated with too great a surprise
Mr. Rightfornow? I want a creator.
A man that hopes! And wishes and wants!
One that feels, and cries
That searches the unburied truth forgot
I want a man that gets angry
Then explains to me what he is not
Someone to claim me
For everything he should want
Mr. Rightfornow, please?
You can be this man,
Simply change everything about you
Then grasp my heart and take my hand.



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on Aug. 3 2010 at 11:29 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

i appriciate it. and i most deff will:)

on Aug. 3 2010 at 11:28 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

thank you:) it was inspired by the name of a wiz khalifa song called "Ms. Rightfornow". I thought id switch it up (considering im a girl. lol) and create a poem about what i was feeling or thinking at the time. i'm glad you like it!

on Aug. 1 2010 at 10:56 pm
Collado92 PLATINUM, Ft.pierce, Florida
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nice I like this, well done.

If you could pleasse check out some of my work and let me know what think.


on Aug. 1 2010 at 8:12 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1754 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

I can totally identify with this, it was expressed perfectly, I love the name.

on Aug. 1 2010 at 7:40 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

thanks so much:) and i'm happy you could relate with it. and i''ll most certainly check out your stuff too:)

Miseltoe GOLD said...
on Jul. 31 2010 at 6:01 pm
Miseltoe GOLD, Boneville, Georgia
15 articles 2 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm a loser and I love to lose. Each time I lose its different, it teaches me something else... but winning loses its glamour after the first few times. so I love to lose

Its a great poem. I identify so much with it and my ex (bc i dont want a mister rightfornow, I don't even want a mr. right). Ne how I love the last three lines there amazing. I'd appreciate if you take a look at some of my stuff and comment on it. :~)

on Jul. 29 2010 at 11:32 am
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

thanks:) my title was inspired by the title of a wiz khalifa rap 'Ms. Rightfornow'. and you're right, you can't change someone.

on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:07 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is so emotional!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!

trblue GOLD said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 8:39 am
trblue GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
14 articles 7 photos 141 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Too often we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you, it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown. It only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and slap that mother@#?!&* upside the head. "

i like the title.

their no Mr.Right 4 u just yet

,but u cant change someone.

 



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