Mr. Rightfornow

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You are my Mr. Rightfornow
Temporarily satisfying all my needs
Completing my thoughts of longing
But only at a mild said please
Mr. Rightfornow, you're an alright guy
Giving me a taste test of the later
Confiscated with too great a surprise
Mr. Rightfornow? I want a creator.
A man that hopes! And wishes and wants!
One that feels, and cries
That searches the unburied truth forgot
I want a man that gets angry
Then explains to me what he is not
Someone to claim me
For everything he should want
Mr. Rightfornow, please?
You can be this man,
Simply change everything about you
Then grasp my heart and take my hand.





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Collado92 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 10:56 pm

nice I like this, well done.

If you could pleasse check out some of my work and let me know what think.

 
MercedesXO replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 11:29 pm
i appriciate it. and i most deff will:)
 
gymbabe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 8:12 pm
I can totally identify with this, it was expressed perfectly, I love the name.
 
MercedesXO replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 11:28 pm
thank you:) it was inspired by the name of a wiz khalifa song called "Ms. Rightfornow". I thought id switch it up (considering im a girl. lol) and create a poem about what i was feeling or thinking at the time. i'm glad you like it!
 
Miseltoe said...
Jul. 31, 2010 at 6:01 pm
Its a great poem. I identify so much with it and my ex (bc i dont want a mister rightfornow, I don't even want a mr. right). Ne how I love the last three lines there amazing. I'd appreciate if you take a look at some of my stuff and comment on it. :~)
 
MercedesXO replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 7:40 pm
thanks so much:) and i'm happy you could relate with it. and i''ll most certainly check out your stuff too:)
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 2:07 pm
This is so emotional!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
 
trblue said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 8:39 am

i like the title.

their no Mr.Right 4 u just yet

,but u cant change someone.

 

 
MercedesXO replied...
Jul. 29, 2010 at 11:32 am
thanks:) my title was inspired by the title of a wiz khalifa rap 'Ms. Rightfornow'. and you're right, you can't change someone.
 
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