July 6, 2010
By IsaiF GOLD, Marietta, Georgia
IsaiF GOLD, Marietta, Georgia
17 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Be soft. Do not let the world make you hard. Do not let pain make you hate. Do not let the bitterness steal your sweetness. Take pride that even though the rest of the world may disagree, you still believe it to be a beautiful place.” -Kurt Vonnegut

a sweet
nectar falling
from a rose
a bloom of emoton
no strife
no worry
just you and me
a beautiful aroma
love the complexity
of the interchangeable
how fights can lead
to a strong passion for
each other
a chemistry felt
a completion of
the heart where
a compulsion for
each other
is made
its like the
first time a
friendship start
butterflies flutter
a spark ignites
and a mutual
thought is born
in the surface of their
words sputter
a heart skips a beat
feelings speak
all that
can be said
from those lovely
lips are
'i love you'

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on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:06 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is so descriptive!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!

on Jul. 28 2010 at 1:21 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

Your descriptions of love were fantastic! This was wonderful to read.

Love is such a complicated thing, yet it's also delightfully simple.

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