Torturer of a King

July 6, 2010
By MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.


That first gust of oxygen creates
Life, given an entirely new beginning
Destination of the born sinner,
Casualties of destruction continue on living
Confrontation too content hidden behind fear,
A blanket of hopes and sadness remain unburdened,
Completely lost of all opportunities to clear,
Her heart and soul ecstatic yet still quite burning.
Constricting with pain and glory
Time stricken and impatient with urgency
Stopped abruptly by a hammering
The finality of the situation
My brain, my heart..hammering.
Stolen from my creator
Thrust into a temporary world
Faltering and resting with near finality,
A King upon questioning of His actuality.
Tormented and abused by love
Near craziness and contemplations,
Departed from another creation-
Into the next with my other lost infestations.
Guilt swarming around regret
Sadness dwindling upon my fears
Loss toppling over confusion
Salt water transpires to tears.
Gratitude for all that was lived through
Hatred and sorrow for all that left scarring
A need beyond all the greatest of wants
Transitioning to the freeness of falling.
Sensing the horrors of the past
Hesitantly hinting at the monsters of the future
Replaying the haunting memories on nothing but fast
A false belief of no greater torture.
With nothing left to dispose of
Complete emptiness exempt from debris
Easily situated between Him and longing,
A fresh new reason to no longer breathe.
Mind left pivoting from then to now
From life undergone too many tragic experiences,
Heart abandoned, searching to be found
She's escaped again remaining delirious.
Lost in an erupted galaxy
Heart plummeted with too many disturbing feelings
My world colliding like sun and moon formed shadowy,
He's thrown at me too complex dealings.
Never that chance of childhood innocence
Mind lost in its own sculpted world
Grand growth, thought and belligerent
Turned tables begin to unfold.
Thoughts of all sins committed
All aliens destruction of man kind
Belief that the punishment was indeed fitted
A picture perfect torturer abandoned completely blind.


The author's comments:
My inspiration for this piece was based on my anger and sadness from my past and present. On expieriences in my life and how it took me a while to come to terms with what has happened in my life. It is based on my realization that i fought to understand why certain cards were dealt to me but in the end i realized human kinds natural sins commited and how we pay for what we do. But that we can indeed be forgiven, only if it is wat God will choose. I come to terms with myself and thought i was left blind, but then realize i just need to find my way. And now i can finally do that.

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on Aug. 1 2010 at 8:00 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

Thank you sooo much!! I'm very thankful for your nice comment and your feedback. I like to hear what others think, and i truly appriciate it. And I'm glad you told me your favorite lines:) I love hearing what peoples favorite lines were! haha. thank you again for the view and comment:)

on Jul. 29 2010 at 8:16 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

so do I!! :)

on Jul. 29 2010 at 7:30 pm
despurlock DIAMOND, Morgantown, West Virginia
79 articles 0 photos 179 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The heart has its reasons which reason does not know." -Pascal, Pensees, 1670

First off, I want to thank you for the coment on my poem "Stupid Book." I also love to read and tried to capture my 'lust' in a poem that would help others relate, and so needless to say that I was VERY pleased with your comment :D Now onto your poem :)

I was astonished at your use of vocabulary, it is wonderful! From the title (which is great!!!) one is pulled into the vividness of your words. My favorite lines are "My brain, my heart..hammering./ Stolen from my creator" as well as "A picture perfect torturer abandoned completely blind." Great work :) 5 stars!


Deiyjuan GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2010 at 3:49 pm
Deiyjuan GOLD, St. Petersburg, Florida
17 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is poetry, so the different experiences I go through in life are my poems." - Deiyjuan Christie

You're very welcome. I love, and enjoy seeing other poets work =]

on Jul. 29 2010 at 12:29 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

thank you so much i truly appriciate it. i'm so happy you feel i have talent as a writer. that means a lot to me. and of course i'll go check out your work:)

on Jul. 29 2010 at 12:28 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

i'm so happy you feel that way:) thank you, that really means a lot and it's great getting peoples feed back and seeing what they really think of your work. i appriciate it.

Miseltoe GOLD said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 6:07 pm
Miseltoe GOLD, Boneville, Georgia
15 articles 2 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm a loser and I love to lose. Each time I lose its different, it teaches me something else... but winning loses its glamour after the first few times. so I love to lose

that was sooooo amazing

Deiyjuan GOLD said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 3:49 pm
Deiyjuan GOLD, St. Petersburg, Florida
17 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is poetry, so the different experiences I go through in life are my poems." - Deiyjuan Christie

Wow...that was great! I felt where you were coming from. You have alot of skills as a writer; keep writing. If you would like please check out my poems.

on Jul. 28 2010 at 3:07 pm
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

thank you! and sure ill go check out your work

on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:01 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

This is so descriptive!!! i love it!!!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that would be great!!! thanks and ur really good!!!

on Jul. 28 2010 at 10:56 am
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

thank you:)

on Jul. 28 2010 at 10:21 am
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1634 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

This was a long read, but entirely worth reading. There was so much truth to it.


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