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Suffering, guilt, pain and shame
Suffer the loss and suffer some more
Come with one who’s felt the pain
And one who’s seen this all before

Misery sorrow pain and loss
Now I know how to shift the blame
Watch me sink beneath it all
And pretend I never even came

Love honor pleasure and truth
Will always speak but not to you
So harness all you’ve been put through
And do to others as was done to you

Dreams pleasure and paradise
Will lie before your very face
In these hopes do not confide
With all of these things do away

Vindictive hateful bitter and cold
Bare these traits with no regrets
Be eaten up and chewed into holes
And reside in the tunnels of my chest.





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Aderes18 said...
Jul. 28, 2011 at 10:17 pm

I really like this poem! It's a poem that sounds good to read when you are very sad, to find something that relates. 

It's written very well, reminds me of poem masters. :)

Reminds me(because of the relationship and cynical part) Casablanca,because the guy can never have the girl that he loves, due to circumstances that I reveal will kill the story. Plus, the guy is         super-cynical. It's a fabulous movie. It's actually one of my faves. ... (more »)

 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 6:58 pm
i do love how you relate. thuggin. merci captain.
 
Aderes18 replied...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 9:08 pm

Thanks! :0

thuggin, what do you mean by that?

Also, even seen Casablanca?

 
Aderes18 replied...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 9:10 pm
I meant, Have you ever seen Casablanca?
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 11:45 pm

nope.

it means youre...GANGSTER.

 

 
Aderes18 replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 5:18 pm

I KNEW THAT!

I just never thought you, out of all people, would use slang. 

And you're pretty ill yourself! 

 

 

 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 10:12 pm
 oh, my fellow homospien, it is that you know not of who I am.
 
timevampire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 2, 2010 at 9:52 am
No you've got me wrong Boo sarcastic though your answer may have been, I don't think I need rehabilitation... I mean these aren't physical disabilities. I don't need electrotherapy. I don't want to find my  useful place in society. I just want to take my notepads and roll them up and squeeze them into a gun and shot people with ideas. ( can you say long and drawn out reply :P )
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 6:54 pm
one of the best replies EVER.  late, yes i am, but i so very love you captain.
 
timevampire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 1, 2010 at 3:35 pm

I relate because I've done it. I'm who doesn't just want to be a St. Jimmy and give the world the finger every now and then?

 

 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 1, 2010 at 6:56 pm
that's nice dear. its good to see you here in mental rehabilitation.
 
MidnightAngel7 said...
Aug. 22, 2010 at 8:32 am
Hmmm, very interesting. The emotions are very sudddle in a sense. In away, it's relatebale. I do truly like it.
 
Boosflash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 22, 2010 at 3:19 pm
thank you my dear for commentating and being related to.
 
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