Phonies in my world

July 5, 2010
By Monica@Roman SILVER, New Haven, Connecticut
Monica@Roman SILVER, New Haven, Connecticut
8 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This too shall pass"


I look all around me and see phonies.
I try to avoid them
But they keep coming at me with thier decieving eyes
Waiting for me to give in
I know thier tricks I know what they plan for me
I maybe paranoid
But I'm not crazy
I know you see them too..laughing at me
SmeRks full of triumph because they know you want to join them
I play nice though and I make sure they all think I like them
I smile when they smile
I talk when they talk
Wait a minute
What am I doing?!
I look all around me
I see those phonies by my side
Acting like my friends
I'm here making them my freinds
Wow...I'm one of them


The author's comments:
I was bored and I was thinking about how poeple talk about how much they dispise phony people and in the end they're the ones who are the hipocrites.

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on Sep. 13 2010 at 6:40 pm
Monica@Roman SILVER, New Haven, Connecticut
8 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This too shall pass"

thanks! :) im glad u liked it!

on Aug. 24 2010 at 2:55 pm
The_Blackest_Rose PLATINUM, Joliet, Montana
31 articles 19 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"History is the fiction we invent to convince ourselves that events are knowable and life has order and direction." --Calvin and Hobbes

Very good! Great structure and use of irony, and very, very relateable! Keep up the good work!

on Aug. 20 2010 at 9:56 am
Monica@Roman SILVER, New Haven, Connecticut
8 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This too shall pass"

thank you so much! :)

on Aug. 19 2010 at 10:54 am
darkangle56 BRONZE, Antioch, Illinois
4 articles 3 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"a wise girl kiss but never loves, listens but doesnt believe, and leaves before she is left"

wow very impressive i loved it

on Aug. 18 2010 at 7:48 pm
ChitChatCat BRONZE, Bay Shore, New York
2 articles 1 photo 5 comments
very good, i like how the narrator changes into the very thing she is speaking about




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