Phonies in my world

July 5, 2010
I look all around me and see phonies.
I try to avoid them
But they keep coming at me with thier decieving eyes
Waiting for me to give in
I know thier tricks I know what they plan for me
I maybe paranoid
But I'm not crazy
I know you see them too..laughing at me
SmeRks full of triumph because they know you want to join them
I play nice though and I make sure they all think I like them
I smile when they smile
I talk when they talk
Wait a minute
What am I doing?!
I look all around me
I see those phonies by my side
Acting like my friends
I'm here making them my freinds
Wow...I'm one of them

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The_Blackest_Rose This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 24, 2010 at 2:55 pm
Very good! Great structure and use of irony, and very, very relateable! Keep up the good work!
Mikky-girl replied...
Sept. 13, 2010 at 6:40 pm
thanks! :) im glad u liked it!
Cathryn.S. said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 7:48 pm
very good, i like how the narrator changes into the very thing she is speaking about
untamedbabe replied...
Aug. 19, 2010 at 10:54 am
wow very impressive i loved it
Mikky-girl replied...
Aug. 20, 2010 at 9:56 am
thank you so much! :)
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