is it just me

July 5, 2010
By jcampgirl PLATINUM, New Caney, Texas
jcampgirl PLATINUM, New Caney, Texas
34 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
when you lie to someone you tell them thay are not worth the truth


Is it just me
That fell like this
Is it just me
That cant get over this
Is it just me
That cant seem to get it right
Is it just me
Or are you hurting to
Is it just me
Or am I losing my mind
Is it just me
Or does this not make since
Is it just me
Or am I’m losing it
Its just me inset it ?


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about me and a frind who dont talk eny more

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on Sep. 4 2010 at 3:40 pm
jcampgirl PLATINUM, New Caney, Texas
34 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
when you lie to someone you tell them thay are not worth the truth

thanks so much aND I WILL !

on Aug. 28 2010 at 10:18 pm
haventy0uheard PLATINUM, Kings Park, New York
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no problem and thanks so much! check out some of my newer stuff if you want. and oh i'm sorry that sucks but you're poems are beautifully written nonetheless! :D

on Aug. 28 2010 at 2:34 pm
jcampgirl PLATINUM, New Caney, Texas
34 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
when you lie to someone you tell them thay are not worth the truth

thanks i rely aprechate it! and thank for the aevive ! sorry about my spelling i have a lerning disablty and messes with it prety bad.  and i love your work!

on Aug. 24 2010 at 7:08 am
haventy0uheard PLATINUM, Kings Park, New York
28 articles 0 photos 186 comments
This is really relatable! I've been through a similar experience, you do a great job at conveying emotion. Just be careful about spelling and it might help if you put a comma at the end of each line to make it flow better. Other than that, great job and I'm glad to see mmy work is in your favorites! =]


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