Untold Stress

June 15, 2010
By TheOnlyWritician GOLD, Clermont, Florida
TheOnlyWritician GOLD, Clermont, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
We loved with a love that was more than love. -Edgar Allen Poe


Stress pours over the sides
As I watch my heart fade away
I wish to find it somewhere
But I think the merchants sold it

I lost myself somewhere along the way
But if I find myself can you help?
Because I held my breath once
And you never reappeared

I dance and sing but nothing comes out
And the more I try the more I fail
So once I let go of myself
Will I lose all control

If I had the answers I would be okay
For the moment I stray away from life
So if you can find me
Find my heart as well


The author's comments:
Life is so stressful!

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on Sep. 2 2010 at 8:23 pm
TheOnlyWritician GOLD, Clermont, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
We loved with a love that was more than love. -Edgar Allen Poe

thanks a lot! i'm not sure what i do best storie or poetry...could you please check out my story called what's beautiful?

 


on Sep. 2 2010 at 8:21 pm
amandap PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
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this is really good! I think my favorite stanza is the first, i really love the last line of the stanza, its great! keep up the good work!

on Sep. 1 2010 at 6:57 pm
apocalyptigirl BRONZE, Staunton, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"DON'T PANIC." ~from The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy by Douglas Adams

I'd add a question after lose all control. I really like all your stuff...

on Aug. 23 2010 at 2:39 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

i really like the title for this! it really caught my attention. it caused a sort of intrigue. the meaning for this is so raw and it's something everyone can relate to. that's probably why i like this piece so much!

check out some of my work, too if you'd like. this is really great! keep writing!!(:


on Jul. 28 2010 at 10:45 am
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
48 articles 0 photos 1754 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

I really liked this one, it was so sweet, descriptive, and realistic. Nice job.


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