Tears of Letting you go

July 4, 2010
By PB60YL BRONZE, West Orange, New Jersey
PB60YL BRONZE, West Orange, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Never Say Never

Something is missing...i know wat it is..
girl its u..i feel so empty inside of me...
who am i suppose to be...it's been a long time...
a long time since i saw..the love in ur eyes..i remember the sun sets we use to see...
maybe we arent meant to be...but girl u and i can change destiny in a blink of an eye..
Just give some time...and i'll make u mines..

At night i cry because of my dreams..i miss u besides me
Maybe i was wrong...oh why did i let u go
this heart of mine has a hole..a hole that needs to be filled..
from you..oh from u...

I clean my tears..because i dont want people to see...
how i felt when u left me..of girl i have tears of letting you go..
I feel cold because girl I dont have a girl to hold...please come back..to me

The author's comments:
this piece is something i wrote one day.I was looking at my ex girlfriends pictures and i was like why did i let her go. Add me on facebook to hear my other ones

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on Jul. 25 2010 at 11:39 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects. - Arnold Glasow

This is really good. I love the way its written and the way you used your words. Its just... AMAZING!!! maybe you could look at some of my work, id love to hear your opinion on it! :) GREAT JOB!!!

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