Errors

July 1, 2010
By Hippiechick10 SILVER, One Stoplight Town, Connecticut
Hippiechick10 SILVER, One Stoplight Town, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Those who deny freedom to others , deserve it not for themselves. (Abe Lincoln)


Human’s eyes
Are like soot
While many shattered dreams
Lay at our foot.
The sky
Has begun to cry
For the wounded soul
Of human being.
We walk the realm of destruction
Letting peace
Have no
Discussion.
We burden
Ourselves
On earth
And we humans
Are the ones
Who give war birth.
We humans
Are like a scar
Faint, but there,
Stretching long and far.
The rocks brace themselves
For the impact of us
Nature has hardened
From our lust.
Where we walk,
the grass no longer stands
For this, humans must repair
The errors of our will
So the endless tragedies of anger
For once will all be still.


The author's comments:
This poem was based on the errors of humanity, where wrong choices lead to broken dreams and destruction. I believe humans should let their compassion branch out to the earth .This would bring about the change needed to correct our wrong doings.

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on Sep. 29 2010 at 4:18 pm
Hippiechick10 SILVER, One Stoplight Town, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Those who deny freedom to others , deserve it not for themselves. (Abe Lincoln)

Thanks! I would love to read some more of your work

on Sep. 5 2010 at 2:15 am
BuckupBukowski BRONZE, Sydney, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Always do sober what you said you'd do drunk. That will teach you to keep your mouth shut- Ernest Hemingway.

Thanks for the comment. The poem is really good. Heavy stuff. Keep writing.

on Aug. 15 2010 at 3:08 pm
Hippiechick10 SILVER, One Stoplight Town, Connecticut
7 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
Those who deny freedom to others , deserve it not for themselves. (Abe Lincoln)

Thank you!

on Aug. 7 2010 at 9:41 pm
darkangle56 BRONZE, Antioch, Illinois
4 articles 3 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"a wise girl kiss but never loves, listens but doesnt believe, and leaves before she is left"

you are realli good. keep up te work =)

on Aug. 1 2010 at 5:38 pm
Hippiechick10 SILVER, One Stoplight Town, Connecticut
7 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
Those who deny freedom to others , deserve it not for themselves. (Abe Lincoln)

Thanks! hey, I'd love to check at some of your work too.

on Jul. 28 2010 at 11:41 am
MumblingMelanie DIAMOND, Jackson, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Don't be a victim; be a titan.

This is awesome! I totally understand what you mean. Definitely not one of those poems you stare at for a while and still have no idea what's being said.

My favorite line was:
"We humans
Are like a scar
Faint, but there,
Stretching long and far."

I'm jealous you thought of it before me. ;)

Anyway, this is wonderful!



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