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Human’s eyes
Are like soot
While many shattered dreams
Lay at our foot.
The sky
Has begun to cry
For the wounded soul
Of human being.
We walk the realm of destruction
Letting peace
Have no
Discussion.
We burden
Ourselves
On earth
And we humans
Are the ones
Who give war birth.
We humans
Are like a scar
Faint, but there,
Stretching long and far.
The rocks brace themselves
For the impact of us
Nature has hardened
From our lust.
Where we walk,
the grass no longer stands
For this, humans must repair
The errors of our will
So the endless tragedies of anger
For once will all be still.



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BuckupBukowski said...
Sept. 5, 2010 at 2:15 am
Thanks for the comment. The poem is really good. Heavy stuff. Keep writing.
 
Hippiechick10 replied...
Sept. 29, 2010 at 4:18 pm
Thanks! I would love to read some more of your work
 
darkangle56 said...
Aug. 7, 2010 at 9:41 pm
you are realli good. keep up te work =)
 
Hippiechick10 replied...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 3:08 pm
Thank you!
 
HIPPIEatHEART_writerINsoul This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 28, 2010 at 11:41 am

This is awesome! I totally understand what you mean. Definitely not one of those poems you stare at for a while and still have no idea what's being said.

My favorite line was:
"We humans
Are like a scar
Faint, but there,
Stretching long and far."

I'm jealous you thought of it before me. ;)

Anyway, this is wonderful!

 
Hippiechick10 replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 5:38 pm
Thanks! hey, I'd love to check at some of your work too.
 
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