Apple Red MAG

May 28, 2008
By Alyssa Smith, Hamilton, TX

She’s typing
Words on a pavement-black keyboard,
Not noticing what she’s typing,
But she’s sure it’s some
Senseless chatter about her day
Being great and fine
When she knows it’s a lie
Because her eyes are rimmed
In an apple red,
Staining her pale porcelain skin.

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This article has 7 comments.

Candice said...
on Mar. 6 2010 at 10:08 am
oh ok im kinda stupid so i didn't quite no but my real name is dove i 'm just candice so then people dont steal my identity u no the deal

bbg.101 said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 3:00 pm
i think we can all relate! i like it i love it i can defanetly rate it a 500 MAX

on Mar. 1 2010 at 12:08 pm
candice- i think it means her eyes are red from crying- when you cry your eyes get puffy and red

on Feb. 1 2010 at 1:18 pm
flairsister BRONZE, Littleton, Colorado
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i think its cool but im kinda dumb so does tht mean her eyes are blood shot?

plz rspnd

on Jul. 28 2009 at 5:17 pm
RachelEliza PLATINUM, Virginia Beach, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
I believe that everything happens for a reason. People change so that you can learn to let go, things go wrong so that you appreciate them when theyre right, and sometimes good things fall apart so that better things can fall together -Marilyn Monroe

i agree with samantha, weve all been thru something along those lines. its really great, keep it up:)

on Jul. 26 2009 at 9:08 pm
icguf615 BRONZE, Mission Viejo, California
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we can all relate

on Jul. 7 2009 at 3:20 pm
Hay_Wire PLATINUM, Independence, Missouri
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what to say? its great.


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