Senseless Immersion

June 25, 2010
By xohtiff BRONZE, Winter Springs, Florida
xohtiff BRONZE, Winter Springs, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"No one has the power to make you feel inferior without your permission." -Eleanor Roosevelt

I immerse myself in you.
I am not at war with love. I've found peace.
Refresh, Relieve, Release.
I take you in.
Intoxicated by your scent, taste, touch
I've fallen.
I am submersed as if rehearsed,
planned yet by a natural.
I become nocturnal for fear I will wake from
this dream.
You mesmerize, tantalize.
I am in awe.
You are beautiful, edgy, fragile, raw.
Each sense is invited by you.
They all join together in a fusion free for all
The eyes in a trance and soon you hypnotize
blues tease greens and the color wheel spins
A game of cat and mouse with each sense
aroused once again
Your touch strikes as lightning to sand
Slowly I feel each crease, line, print of each hand
Electric; so i shake. Electric; And I break.
Give in and ride the current; liberating is your touch.
I edge closer craving for more.
Your scent tickles my nose. Sweet, daring, and bold.
As each domino causes the next to fall
one sense seems to tease them all
Essence links to taste and now one is jealous
Dangerous your savor for it is addicting
Flavors dance across the tongue; tickle the taste buds
No other compares. Paralyzing.
So I have become enveloped; surrounded
Delved to the depths of you
Been challenged, teased, dared, pleased,
and I have broken all restraints, walls
allowed myself to fall into all that is you.
And so allow me once more to immerse myself
For I crave your essence; I crave intoxication
by your pressence. You are my opiate.
I fall to the steps of your door
Do allow me in once more?

The author's comments:
My inspiration for this piece was the fun, sexy, electric, ride that you embark on with the person that you are completely in love with. The constant intrigue and the submission of one human to another.

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This article has 7 comments.

Tiffers said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 9:58 pm
Thanks everyone for your comments. they mean a lot:)

LahLah said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 4:52 pm
I'm in AWE...

auntie said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 3:49 pm
Yay girl! ur bringing back private memories from loooong ago.  sweet!

Tiffers122 said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:18 pm
Thank you very much. you just rate it one out of five stars at the top.

seaburgess said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 1:40 pm
Beautiful work Tiffany!  Can't see where to vote though.

k_pons said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 1:34 pm
This poem is AMAZING, you are a very very talented writer and im not just saying this cause this poem is about me but because its true. i love you and i support your awesome skills and talents :) you are for sure going to win baby. 

on Jul. 28 2010 at 1:20 pm
Wow, Really Good! I didn't know you wrote poetry!

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