Such a cliché

June 21, 2010
By armygirl22 GOLD, Brandon, Florida
armygirl22 GOLD, Brandon, Florida
13 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
i finally understand what true love really means. love means that you care for another person's happiness more than your own, no matter how painful the choices you face might be.


When you left,
you took a piece of me with you.

When you drove away,
you threw my heart on the ground.

When you didn't cry,
you forgot all our memories.

When you brought me down,
you lowered your self-esteem.

When you laughed in my face,
you became a monster.

When you never turned back,
you cut my heart like razor blade would.

When you found a new love,
you let me die there.

When you showered her off,
you killed my soul.

When you told me "I miss you,"
you made me whole world crash.

When you wanted to hang out again,
you got my hopes all up.

When you told me that we'd never be "us" again,
you made me feel worthless.

When you asked me back out,
you brought everything back that you took away.


The author's comments:
A flashback within five minutes.

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on Sep. 9 2010 at 9:23 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
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Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

Awww... Im sorry. ) :

on Sep. 8 2010 at 8:37 pm
armygirl22 GOLD, Brandon, Florida
13 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
i finally understand what true love really means. love means that you care for another person's happiness more than your own, no matter how painful the choices you face might be.

yes, but right now we're on a break :/

on Jul. 27 2010 at 10:33 pm
armygirl22 GOLD, Brandon, Florida
13 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
i finally understand what true love really means. love means that you care for another person's happiness more than your own, no matter how painful the choices you face might be.

yes, me and my boyfriend of four years have gone through hell and back with each other

on Jul. 27 2010 at 10:32 pm
armygirl22 GOLD, Brandon, Florida
13 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
i finally understand what true love really means. love means that you care for another person's happiness more than your own, no matter how painful the choices you face might be.

yeah, but i truely love him. after four years with him, i've realized i can't live without him.

Felicia GOLD said...
on Jul. 27 2010 at 8:48 am
Felicia GOLD, Chandler, Arizona
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this is good but i dont get why you would take him back but i get sometimes its worth risking the pain again. lots can relate

on Jul. 26 2010 at 3:01 pm
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
31 articles 2 photos 226 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

This is a really great poem! Is it from experience?


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