It's You

June 20, 2010
By tweety1ofakind BRONZE, Magnolia, Mississippi
tweety1ofakind BRONZE, Magnolia, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
\" You Must Be The Change That You Want To See \"


I've been searching for a place to hide
Somewhere I can stop to cry
A place where he will never find
For it's him who causes these weary eyes
A place where the nights are quiet
A place where the lights are low
For the pain I can't bare
I'm in search for a place where there are no lies
For my soul is about to die


The author's comments:
everyone needs a place where you can be alone to heal.

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on Aug. 15 2010 at 9:28 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

Ooh... very creative. I liked it. Just maybe make it more concrete whether or not you are intending to rhyme or not. I really think it would let me enjoy your meaning more. Just look out for unintentional or intentional rhyming. 

If you could, check out my work sometime. I would really appreciate it! Thanks!



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