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I've been searching for a place to hide
Somewhere I can stop to cry
A place where he will never find
For it's him who causes these weary eyes
A place where the nights are quiet
A place where the lights are low
For the pain I can't bare
I'm in search for a place where there are no lies
For my soul is about to die



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sleeplessdreamer said...
Aug. 15, 2010 at 9:28 pm:

Ooh... very creative. I liked it. Just maybe make it more concrete whether or not you are intending to rhyme or not. I really think it would let me enjoy your meaning more. Just look out for unintentional or intentional rhyming. 

If you could, check out my work sometime. I would really appreciate it! Thanks!

 
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