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i have a personality
but no name
i have a soul
but it cant be tamed
i love water but hate to swim
i hate losing but love to win
my life revolves around not much
i have too many feelings
theyre all bunched up
i feel like im in a prison
i feel like im in a cell
i woud like to explain myself
with words
but i know i will fail
i want to escape
i want to be free
i should live life being happy
im gonna face the world
im gonna face my fears
it doesnt matter how long it takes
months?
years?
im finally finding myself
but i still feel
oh so anxious?
i want to tavle the world
and see all there is to see
i want to accomplish alot with my life
and be all that i can be.



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Let_It_Be said...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 10:52 pm:
wow. very nice. good job! can anyone who reads this comment/rate my poems: Speak and Imagine? thanks! <3
 
jassmine replied...
Aug. 7, 2010 at 3:14 pm :
thanks so much![: and sure. i will<3
 
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alenkaaa said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 3:29 pm:

like i said, i always return favors! so i rated ur work and now commenting it! :)

great job on this piece! its..its amazing!! i love how it rhymes and how u transform ur feelings into words!

 
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MelanieLouise This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 2:50 pm:
very good :) i love how it flows so easily. i would love it if you checked out some of my work. keep writing, Mel :)
 
jassmine replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 3:01 pm :
thanks so much! and mkay ill check out ur stuff. [:
 
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Lovebug07 said...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 12:33 am:
Wow this is very well written. I really like it!!! Your words are well used to get your point across keep it up. maybe you can check out my work. Id love to get your opinion on it :)
 
cameronjay replied...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 1:12 am :
thanks so much! and ok i will!(:
 
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babigerl1194 said...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 11:34 am:
whoa. this is a really good piece with the right thought and pleasant rhyme. like you explained it all so well. i too feel like this sometimes bbut oculd never put it soo pleasently.
 
cameronjay replied...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 1:13 am :
aw, thanks! it means alot to me (:
 
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