no name

June 24, 2010
By jassmine BRONZE, Fort Worth, Texas
jassmine BRONZE, Fort Worth, Texas
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i have a personality
but no name
i have a soul
but it cant be tamed
i love water but hate to swim
i hate losing but love to win
my life revolves around not much
i have too many feelings
theyre all bunched up
i feel like im in a prison
i feel like im in a cell
i woud like to explain myself
with words
but i know i will fail
i want to escape
i want to be free
i should live life being happy
im gonna face the world
im gonna face my fears
it doesnt matter how long it takes
im finally finding myself
but i still feel
oh so anxious?
i want to tavle the world
and see all there is to see
i want to accomplish alot with my life
and be all that i can be.

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This article has 9 comments.

jassmine said...
on Aug. 7 2010 at 3:14 pm
thanks so much![: and sure. i will<3

on Aug. 6 2010 at 10:52 pm
HippieNamedAnna PLATINUM, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Let It Be-The Beatles
Music is the only thing that makes sense any more-Me
Make love, not war-a bunch of people
Roses are red, Violets are blue, I have five fingers, The middle one's for you-Me :)

wow. very nice. good job! can anyone who reads this comment/rate my poems: Speak and Imagine? thanks! <3

on Aug. 4 2010 at 3:29 pm
alenkaaa BRONZE, Battle Ground, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
I'm falling apart, I'm barely breathing. With a broken heart. Thats still beating...

like i said, i always return favors! so i rated ur work and now commenting it! :)

great job on this piece! its..its amazing!! i love how it rhymes and how u transform ur feelings into words!

on Aug. 3 2010 at 3:01 pm
jassmine BRONZE, Fort Worth, Texas
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thanks so much! and mkay ill check out ur stuff. [:

on Aug. 3 2010 at 2:50 pm
MelanieLouise PLATINUM, Plymouth, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
to live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong

very good :) i love how it flows so easily. i would love it if you checked out some of my work. keep writing, Mel :)

on Aug. 2 2010 at 1:13 am
jassmine BRONZE, Fort Worth, Texas
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aw, thanks! it means alot to me (:

on Aug. 2 2010 at 1:12 am
jassmine BRONZE, Fort Worth, Texas
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thanks so much! and ok i will!(:

on Jul. 26 2010 at 12:33 am
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects. - Arnold Glasow

Wow this is very well written. I really like it!!! Your words are well used to get your point across keep it up. maybe you can check out my work. Id love to get your opinion on it :)

on Jul. 25 2010 at 11:34 am
babigerl1194 PLATINUM, Margaretville, New York
23 articles 10 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
wat doesnt kill you only makes you stronger

whoa. this is a really good piece with the right thought and pleasant rhyme. like you explained it all so well. i too feel like this sometimes bbut oculd never put it soo pleasently.

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