Alone

June 24, 2010
By Liz891 PLATINUM, Endwell, New York
Liz891 PLATINUM, Endwell, New York
25 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't know what to write here. :D
P.S. I'm really hyper!!!!!!!!!!


In a petrified darkness
I sit alone
Hypnotized by my own fear
Under an unbreakable trance

Craving help,
I lose my direction,
I lose my grip on reality,
which I never had

Starved of love
Deprive of attention
Given pity
Lacking hope



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on Nov. 16 2010 at 11:14 am
blanking_out GOLD, Bonita Springs, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Follow the leader, but not too close, just in case they fall.

So I randomly clicked a button on Teenink and it brought me to this poem. Reading it was like looking at my past and how i used to feel about life. I was a mess. i like how you wrote about being hypnotized by one's own fear. It is true, a very scary part of reality that i'd hate to go through again. all i can say is that it's best to take a stand against it. great work. very very good!




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