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Set Underneath skin,
Is a heart, cold and not red?
But blue that has no beat.

In their eyes rising only to fall,
Every kiss was of passionate leave,
Her cold heart that freezes thick,
Shatters! As and falls to bits,
Blue Blood similar tears she lets go,
While she thaws departed so fast.




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leelee1373 said...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 10:39 am:
Thank you and your welcome.
 
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Amommylikeme said...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 10:17 am:

This is really great.

you have some real talent.

thanks for commenting my work.

 
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Sencere said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 6:39 pm:
i like it 4 stars
 
leelee1373 replied...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 8:06 pm :
Thank You!
 
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