Look in my eyes

June 30, 2010
By vampirechicksx3 BRONZE, Ontario, California
vampirechicksx3 BRONZE, Ontario, California
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Favorite Quote:
"what a strange world it is where you can have sex as much as you like, but love is taboo"- the powerbook by jeanette winterson
"Seduce my mind and you can have my body, Find my soul and im yours forever"

Look in my eyes
Tell me what you see
Because I’m lost
I can’t see myself anymore
I can feel myself dying inside, isn’t sad?
I wish I had a savior, but then again do I want to be saved
This world hurts, lies becomes truths and truths become lies
Inside I’m lost
Can anyone find me?

The author's comments:
everyday i look at myself and i dont know what i see so i wrote this

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Felicia GOLD said...
on Jul. 24 2010 at 1:18 pm
Felicia GOLD, Chandler, Arizona
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several girls ca and guys can relate. poems like thses are the ones that help others wen they read it

Sencere BRONZE said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 6:44 pm
Sencere BRONZE, Annapolis, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
Why am I fighting to live, when I'm just living to fight. Why am I trying to see when there ain't nothing in sight. Why am I trying to give when no one gives me a try. Why am I dying to live, when I'm just living to die.

that's a great question 5 stars

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