Fire Hot Love

June 29, 2010
Completly blinded by a guy,
Totally giggly, absolutly shy.
Blushing deep red,
Thoughts going crazy in my head.
Hold my hand,
Our kisses are oh so grand.
Make me giggle when I catch you staring,
Make my blood turn hot when I know that you're still caring.
A smile that will melt my heart,
A laugh that will never tear me apart.
See you soon,
I'll think of you're eyes as I watch the moon





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Lovebug07 said...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 11:49 pm
I really enjoyed this... Its really good, lol I also love writing poems about love. Lol i honesly didnt want it to end. maybe you could check out my work, i would love to get your opinion on it :)
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 12:29 am
Haha love the caption!! great poem!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that wuld be awesome!!! especially to anonymous!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
 
OffMyRocker... said...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 2:05 pm
Hmmm... It was interesting. I liked it but there was something thta I found a little off, I dont know what it was.
 
sarahbug16 replied...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 4:34 pm
its about my boyfriend. i wrote the same poem and gave it to him for his birthday.
 
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