Fire Hot Love

June 29, 2010
By Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"the greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return." -MOULIN ROUGE (song lyrics)


Completly blinded by a guy,
Totally giggly, absolutly shy.
Blushing deep red,
Thoughts going crazy in my head.
Hold my hand,
Our kisses are oh so grand.
Make me giggle when I catch you staring,
Make my blood turn hot when I know that you're still caring.
A smile that will melt my heart,
A laugh that will never tear me apart.
See you soon,
I'll think of you're eyes as I watch the moon


The author's comments:
I love writing about love.....(laugh out loud)

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on Jul. 25 2010 at 11:49 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects. - Arnold Glasow

I really enjoyed this... Its really good, lol I also love writing poems about love. Lol i honesly didnt want it to end. maybe you could check out my work, i would love to get your opinion on it :)

on Jul. 23 2010 at 12:29 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Haha love the caption!! great poem!! if you could please rate and comment on my work that wuld be awesome!!! especially to anonymous!!! thanks and ur really good!!!

on Jul. 21 2010 at 4:34 pm
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
36 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return." -MOULIN ROUGE (song lyrics)

its about my boyfriend. i wrote the same poem and gave it to him for his birthday.

on Jul. 21 2010 at 2:05 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

Hmmm... It was interesting. I liked it but there was something thta I found a little off, I dont know what it was.


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