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July 19, 2010
By Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
25 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects. - Arnold Glasow


When I look up at the stars at night, I think about you...
The way you make me feel,
and our future together.
Your everything I could ever want and so much more.
Your blue eyes put me into a trance that is hard to escape,
I've never seen eyes so gorgeous.
Your touch sends chills through out my body.
Your voice is a soothing sound that always calms me down.
The word to describe it is perfect.
Theres nothing better,
It just feels right.


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on Aug. 3 2010 at 1:10 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects. - Arnold Glasow

Thanks so much, That means alot!! And I I will surely check out your work!! :)

on Aug. 2 2010 at 5:12 pm
brysmarie12 PLATINUM, Neoga, Illinois
22 articles 1 photo 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am the author of my own life... unfortunately I'm writing in pen and can't erase my mistakes.

Oh my goodness I love this! :) It's easy to relate to, nice job! Maybe you could check out some of my work? I love the feedback and advice!

on Aug. 1 2010 at 5:50 pm
Sissybug2012 PLATINUM, Union, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"the greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return." -MOULIN ROUGE (song lyrics)

awwww how cute, i kinda have a poem like this

on Jul. 23 2010 at 3:56 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
25 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects. - Arnold Glasow

Thank you  so much!!! It means alot. And I would be glad to read your work. /) Thanks again :)

on Jul. 23 2010 at 3:39 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
59 articles 0 photos 670 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

I loved it - it describes where I'm at PERFECTLY but his eyes are brown :) Anyway, about this poem - "The word to describe it is perfect."

Could you check out my stuff? Thanks so much and keep writing


on Jul. 23 2010 at 11:17 am
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
25 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects. - Arnold Glasow

Thanks!!! :)

Babie PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 3:44 am
Babie PLATINUM, Modesto, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I Hate Kid's I have to many realitives.....ahhhhh!"

i loved it realy deep

on Jul. 23 2010 at 12:11 am
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
25 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects. - Arnold Glasow

Thanks so much!!! And I will definately read and comment on your work. I would love to get your opinion on my other work if youd be ok with that... THANKS AGAIN!!! :)

on Jul. 22 2010 at 11:58 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Wow i love the emotion!! its so powerful!!  if you could please rate and comment on my work that wuld be awesome!!! especially to anonymous!!! thanks and ur really good!!!

on Jul. 22 2010 at 4:43 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
25 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects. - Arnold Glasow

Thanks so much! :)

on Jul. 22 2010 at 4:39 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
25 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects. - Arnold Glasow

Thanks... Yea I usually like to write longer ones but sometimes I just get stuck lol :)

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on Jul. 22 2010 at 4:39 pm
-Mz.S- SILVER, Quincy, Illinois
9 articles 1 photo 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
two fingers up & i'm out! ;)

Amazing poem. (:

on Jul. 22 2010 at 4:31 pm
lily_says_rawr GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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This poem is really pretty. I don't usually like poems this short, but I like this one.

on Jul. 22 2010 at 2:48 pm
alaskatrailmutt, Jefferson, Maryland
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Sure thing :D

on Jul. 22 2010 at 2:18 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
25 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects. - Arnold Glasow

lol if you get the chance you should read some of my other works. I would love to get your opinion on them as well. :)

on Jul. 22 2010 at 2:11 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
25 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects. - Arnold Glasow

THANKS!!! that really means a lot.. :)

on Jul. 22 2010 at 2:51 am
christin.bass SILVER, Eagle River, Alaska
8 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
you will never make it big if you dream small. youll never learn if your living in the past and youll never understand if you were to fast forward, just press play and live!

It's beautiful. (:

on Jul. 21 2010 at 2:18 pm
alaskatrailmutt, Jefferson, Maryland
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I ment like if you wanted to make it better XD lol! your welcome :)

on Jul. 21 2010 at 12:31 pm
Lovebug07 PLATINUM, Topeka, Kansas
25 articles 0 photos 128 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughter is a tranquilizer with no side effects. - Arnold Glasow

Thank you!!! :) and i see wat your saying I'm gonna have to work on it LOL

on Jul. 21 2010 at 9:43 am
alaskatrailmutt, Jefferson, Maryland
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I like it, I think you could expand apon it you where getting somewhere!!! :D Nice job!




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