You...

July 19, 2010
When I look up at the stars at night, I think about you...
The way you make me feel,
and our future together.
Your everything I could ever want and so much more.
Your blue eyes put me into a trance that is hard to escape,
I've never seen eyes so gorgeous.
Your touch sends chills through out my body.
Your voice is a soothing sound that always calms me down.
The word to describe it is perfect.
Theres nothing better,
It just feels right.





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OneGodForever32 said...
Aug. 2, 2010 at 5:12 pm
Oh my goodness I love this! :) It's easy to relate to, nice job! Maybe you could check out some of my work? I love the feedback and advice!
 
Lovebug07 replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 1:10 pm
Thanks so much, That means alot!! And I I will surely check out your work!! :)
 
sarahbug16 said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 5:50 pm
awwww how cute, i kinda have a poem like this
 
GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 3:39 pm

I loved it - it describes where I'm at PERFECTLY but his eyes are brown :) Anyway, about this poem - "The word to describe it is perfect."

Could you check out my stuff? Thanks so much and keep writing

 
Lovebug07 replied...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 3:56 pm
Thank you  so much!!! It means alot. And I would be glad to read your work. /) Thanks again :)
 
crubs3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 22, 2010 at 11:58 pm
Wow i love the emotion!! its so powerful!!  if you could please rate and comment on my work that wuld be awesome!!! especially to anonymous!!! thanks and ur really good!!!
 
Lovebug07 replied...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 12:11 am
Thanks so much!!! And I will definately read and comment on your work. I would love to get your opinion on my other work if youd be ok with that... THANKS AGAIN!!! :)
 
AllayAlaneLarllyLuu said...
Jul. 22, 2010 at 4:39 pm
Amazing poem. (:
 
Lovebug07 replied...
Jul. 22, 2010 at 4:43 pm
Thanks so much! :)
 
Lily14 said...
Jul. 22, 2010 at 4:31 pm
This poem is really pretty. I don't usually like poems this short, but I like this one.
 
Lovebug07 replied...
Jul. 22, 2010 at 4:39 pm
Thanks... Yea I usually like to write longer ones but sometimes I just get stuck lol :)
 
christin.bass said...
Jul. 22, 2010 at 2:51 am
It's beautiful. (:
 
Lovebug07 replied...
Jul. 22, 2010 at 2:11 pm
THANKS!!! that really means a lot.. :)
 
moonpetal said...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 9:43 am
I like it, I think you could expand apon it you where getting somewhere!!! :D Nice job!
 
Lovebug07 replied...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 12:31 pm
Thank you!!! :) and i see wat your saying I'm gonna have to work on it LOL
 
moonpetal replied...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 2:18 pm
I ment like if you wanted to make it better XD lol! your welcome :)
 
Lovebug07 replied...
Jul. 22, 2010 at 2:18 pm
lol if you get the chance you should read some of my other works. I would love to get your opinion on them as well. :)
 
moonpetal replied...
Jul. 22, 2010 at 2:48 pm
Sure thing :D
 
Babie replied...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 3:44 am
i loved it realy deep
 
Lovebug07 replied...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 11:17 am
Thanks!!! :)
 
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