Clean This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

i'll curl up
in the dishwasher

somewhere in
between the

plates and bowls
and you'll start

the heavy duty cycle
because maybe

after hours of hot
water scalding me

i'll finally
be clean enough

for you.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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Godinspiresher43 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 18, 2014 at 10:41 pm
I didsagree with both of the people that commented. I think your poem was extremely creative imaginative and the length was perfect. Short sweet and to the point. Very economical. :)
 
trigger19This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 29, 2011 at 11:51 am

I love you crearive it this a good piece

 

 
AbstractFragment This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 8:01 pm
I dis-agree with Lilly's comment in that it needs more, because I definately feel there is a solid enough argument here but it needs to be more solid. I believe you need to work on some flow, but other than that I olike your style.
 
Lilly3217 said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 1:54 pm
I like your creativeness but it needs MORE. keep working and you will be great
 
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